Close up of Jennifer's eyes opening
Panning shot of Jennifer's hands tied, shot pans down body- medium close up
Cuts to sepia/black and white flash back- Jenny walking home through secluded walkway- medium shot, silent
Back to real time
POV shot, jenny looks around room sees table of 'tools' then hears something- looks at door
Cuts to flashback, bumps into shadowed figure- Jenny's phone is ringing- medium close up ( doesn't show phone)
Back to real time, phone still ringing- extreme close up of phone with caller ID.
Stays zoomed in on phone, someone comes into room, do not see person ( diagetic sound)
Extreme close up of hand ending phone call
I like the idea of using flashbacks then cutting to real time in a garage. The images of tools are threatening and connote all manner of possible violence/abuse.
ReplyDeleteYou've got to think through why the girl is in the garage, could it be a psychopath has kidnapped her? A possessive boyfriend wants her to himself? Or?
|'d suggest you keep you consider shots for the garage like, worm's eye, tilt, low angle, extreme high angle and so on. This is where your art will come in. Making the garage look as sinister as possible, use of torches and dim lighting may add to suspense.